I was confused and bemused.
I was lost and weary in daylight.
My soul was lamented & cold.
My green meadow was out of my sight.
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I wished to die and acquire tranquil eternity.
I was alone like a sad & decayed flesh.
My pious spirit and flawless beauty,.
Was forbidden and untraced.
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But You reached for my astray soul.
With zeal and verdict of forever’.
You loved my solitary parts in solace.
Together we walked for universe’s savour.
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My shambolic hairs, tormented eyes,
wet cheeks and broken heart.
Of all you took charge to guard them with relived sigh.
I raised from my cocoon, took a new birth.
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You guarded my tender soul, a very little act.
You gathered shattered pieces of my life.
Rekindled it with love,
Your eyes revealed that you are a naive.
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You held me like a crib does to infant.
You loved me like if it’s the last time.
You amused me with your melodious love chants.
You made me inferred that loving someone wasn’t a crime.
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Roli…..
Wonderfull post . love the way you write. thank you for sharing. keep sharing your words. stay in touch. hapy blogging
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Wonderful transformed
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Thank you so much
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Really interesting and amazing. Last few stanzas made it particularly awesome.
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Thank you so much and just now written this https://sanskriti977.wordpress.com/2017/10/27/a-day-will-come/ please go through it tio
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Again it was a brilliant.. the transformations a pure form of love can bring , you wrote it fabulously.
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Thank you so much and love transforms us may be in a beautiful creature or the worst one it depends on what type of person you fall in love. Thank you for reading ππ
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Most welcome ππ
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Look at the new post once more
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https://sanskriti977.wordpress.com/2017/10/28/once-more/ read my new post please
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Its goodβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you means a lot..
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My another poem is A day will come… please read it also
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https://sanskriti977.wordpress.com/2017/10/28/once-more/ another one please review
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Out of words
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Really?? Bhaiya I advised you to increase your vocabulary πππ
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Finally your poetry is worth reading. You wrote really well. And NOW it seems like you started writing POETRY in a POETIC way. Keep growing. Loved this one. ππ»ππ»ππ»
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I was longing that now you read my works. Thanks for reading and thanks for compliment too
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You’re welcome. π
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wonderfull post beautifullll
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Thank you so much sir
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https://sanskriti977.wordpress.com/2017/11/05/love-%e2%9d%a4/ my new post
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https://wp.me/p8HyZd-34 please see my new post
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